Animator release artwork

I tried so hard on this, but I admit theirs somethings I aren't happy about with this. Lets just say something about its not right, but thats just me then the picture itself. I made this for my animation relase log for deviantart, I made this to show how proud of myself to try so hard to improve with animation. I may not gotten much done, but I have learn and understand about animations and proud that I did a great job on them. So anyways I hope you enjoy my artwork and the others for I've had done over the passed months.
P.s I might update on this to make it better, so you know.

Characters, Angel, Cnder, artwork belongs to me!

You may not edit etc without my pemission!